Bane's Past « Thread Started on Apr 10, 2008, 9:55pm »
Part 1: Birth of Evil
A hollow breeze flitted through the trees. The night was disturbingly unsettling. The leaves rustled franticly in the wind. Below the canopy excited yips came from a small pack of wolves.
A large Black male wolf lay eagerly by a den. His paws stretched out before him with his head between them. The other wolves in the pack stood in a semi circle around him. Small yips, and yelps of pain escaped the dens entrance. The male shuffled to his feet, but settled back down when the yelping stopped.
A white female poked her head out of the tight den. Her ice blue eyes gazed lovingly into her mates. The male's tail wagged excitedly, sending small clouds of dust whenever it slapped against the ground. The she-wolf slipped the rest of her slender body out of the den. She shook herself of the dirt that clung to her fur. Happily she exclaimed to the pack in a soft voice. "A male and a Female." The pack scampered around happily. The male glanced over his shoulder and delivered a stone cold stare. "Shhh." He ordered.
-------A few weeks later--------
The white-she wolf poked a paw into the den and scooped out a silver and white female pup. "This is Rose." She gently gave the pup a small tap on its rump. Wobbly she stood up and tried to take a few steps forward. The fuzzy pup's head looked twice as large as its body.
The pup happily began to blow bubbles with her mouth, she shreiked with joy when they popped. Her baby blue eyes focused, cross-eyed, onto her nose. The male laughed and buried his nose into the pup.
The female dove her paw once more in the den. A large black male clung to her paw. The packed shrieked and shrunk back, even the male, who seemed overjoyed at the sight of his pups for the first time was hesitant. "He looks like his Grandfather!" One wolf whispered.
The pup was unaware of the hard stares he was being given. Instead he seemed to be much happier gnawing his gums on his Mother's paws. "This is Shane." The she-wolf choked out, fearing the harsh stares. She new what was coming next.
One of the wolves stepped forward to interject.
"Enough." The male said, hushing the pack of wolves. "I'll have none of that! Demetrius is gone, if you don't remember. Do not mention this again." He spoke out of fear. The male's father had been Demetrius. Demetrius was a demonic wolf, who killed any in his way to gain absolute power. Half the pack was lost to him, countless amount of blood was spilt. Only recently 3 months ago had he been defeated by the Black Male. Now he tried so hard to wipe away the blood stained memory of his father. He wanted his son to have a clean legacy, one that he would create for himself. Only later will he find how wrong he was.
I'm perfectly normal. The voices tell me so... I don't suffer from insanity. I enjoy every minute of it... I hear voices in my head, and they don't like you...{=}{/=}{=}{/=}{=}{/=}{=}{/=}{=}{/=}{=}{/=}
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Re: Bane's Past « Reply #3 on Apr 12, 2008, 7:25pm »
OOC: Just to let y'all know Jasper can read minds, and Rose is immune to every ability out there. All of them....
This is what Rose thinks, its her point of view looking back.
Shane was never good. He never did anything for me, for his pack. My parents loved us unconditionally at first. We were the first and only pups born to them, and the first to be born since my Grandfather's rule. My Mother, Silver did everything to protect Shane, and protect the pack from Shane. She knew what he was, what he could do. She should have stopped him while she still could. My father Talon was no help either. He tried so hard to block what Shane did. I think in turn he was trying to block out his father. All Shane caused was pain and death. Innocent Blood spilled defending our pack. I would have died if It weren't for my Jasper.
I'm perfectly normal. The voices tell me so... I don't suffer from insanity. I enjoy every minute of it... I hear voices in my head, and they don't like you...{=}{/=}{=}{/=}{=}{/=}{=}{/=}{=}{/=}{=}{/=}
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Re: Bane's Past « Reply #6 on Apr 17, 2008, 7:07pm »
Updated Version
The Beginning of the Beginning:
A hollow breeze flitted through the trees. The night was disturbingly unsettling. The leaves rustled franticly in the wind. Below the canopy excited yips came from a small pack of wolves.
A large Black male wolf lay eagerly by a den. His paws stretched out before him with his head between them. The other wolves in the pack stood in a semi circle around him. Small yips, and yelps of pain escaped from the dens entrance. The male shuffled to his feet, but settled back down when the yelping stopped.
A white female poked her head out of the tight den. Her ice blue eyes gazed lovingly into her mates. The male's tail wagged excitedly, sending small clouds of dust whenever it slapped against the ground. The she-wolf slipped the rest of her slender body out of the den. She shook herself of the dirt that clung to her fur. Happily she exclaimed to the pack in a soft voice. "A male and a Female." The pack scampered around happily. The male glanced over his shoulder and delivered a stone cold stare. "Shhh..." He ordered.
-------A few weeks later--------
The white-she wolf poked a paw into the den and scooped out a silver and white female pup. "This is Rose." She gently gave the pup a small tap on its rump. Wobbly she stood up and tried to take a few steps forward. The fuzzy pup's head looked twice as large as its body.
The pup happily began to blow bubbles with her mouth, she shrieked with joy when they popped. Her baby blue eyes focused, cross-eyed, onto her nose. The male laughed and buried his nose into the pup.
The female dove her paw once more in the den. A large black male clung to her paw. The packed shrieked and shrunk back, even the male, who seemed overjoyed at the sight of his pups for the first time was hesitant. "He looks like his Grandfather!" One wolf whispered.
The pup was unaware of the hard stares he was being given. Instead he seemed to be much happier gnawing his gums on his Mother's paws. "This is Shane." The she-wolf choked out, fearing the harsh stares. She new what was coming next.
One of the wolves stepped forward to interject.
"Enough." The male said, hushing the pack of wolves. "I'll have none of that! Demetrius is gone, if you don't remember. Do not mention this again." He spoke out of fear. The male's father had been Demetrius. Demetrius was a demonic wolf, who killed any in his way to gain absolute power. Half the pack was lost to him, countless amount of blood was spilt. Only recently 3 months ago had he been defeated by the Black Male. Now he tried so hard to wipe away the blood stained memory of his father. He wanted his son to have a clean legacy, one that he would create for himself. Only later will he find how wrong he was.
Prologue:
Shane was never good. He never did anything for me, for his pack. My parents loved us unconditionally at first. We were the first and only pups born to them, and the first to be born since my Grandfather's rule. My Mother, Silver did everything to protect Shane, and protect the pack from Shane. She knew what he was, what he could do. She should have stopped him while she still could. My father Talon was no help either. He tried so hard to block what Shane did. I think in turn he was trying to block out his father. All Shane caused was pain and death. Innocent Blood spilled defending our pack. I would have died if it weren't for my Jasper.
Chapter 1 --------------
The large black wolf eyed his pack. Crouching low in the bunches a low rumble erupted in his throat. His sister, Rose, was in the clearing with another pack member, Trout. Even though Trout was older Shane still was larger then him. His blazing red eyes stared coolly at the wolf, sizing him up. "Do it." a voice commanded in his head. "You know you want to feel the kill, the pleasure, the triumph." Shane circled the clearing quietly, making sure to stay concealed in the bushes. His deep black blood red pelt merged into the shadows, making him invisible. He walked into the clearing, casually, his tail sweeping to the side. Trout turned around and faced Shane his eyes flickered with fear. "This was a wolf to fear. He had the spirit of his Grandfather in him, his heart was black, no, there was no heart." Trout thought. A black wolf crept into his mind. “Leave or die” It said in a grizzly voice. Trout went rigid. The voice pierced his mind, and let drain all hope of happiness. Shane grinned. ---
"Trout!" I yelled, as I scampered through the meadow. He cast a smile over his shoulder and fell to the ground, rolling onto his back. "We're never going to catch anything with you running about like that." I shouted, knowing all hopes of catching anything had been diminished long before I had shouted.
The bushes rustled in the corner of the meadow, but I gave it no notice. Then I noticed Trout’s sudden silence, and whipped around looking for its cause. “Shane!” I screamed. “Stop it! Your Hurting him!” Shane laughed coolly. I hated his laugh. “I know.” I knew there was no point in arguing. “Come on” I tried coaxed Trout out of his trance giving him a comforting glance, hoping he would be alright. Shane’s mind ran wild. “I hate you!” The words squished out from between his teeth, as he spat them at me.
“He is evil Rose.” Trout whispered as they we walked back to camp. “I know he is, and we have to find a way to stop him before this gets worse.” “Yes, but how are we going to convince your parents?” “Silver and Talon are usually understand. But they are very difficult when it comes to this subject. I’m not sure they can help.” I looked down at my feet. Trout opened his mouth but didn’t say anything the rest of the way back to camp.
Ice and Jasper had just returned from hunting. Their muzzles were drenched in blood. A half-eaten carcass of a Rabbit lay at their feet. My stomach grumbled at the scent of food. “Jasper!” Rose called from across the clearing. He Ran to greet me, his paws slapping the ground. Jasper closed his eyes and drank in my scent. “Be Careful out there!” I scolded. “We still haven’t found Eclipse." I paused hoping I hadn't upset him, "She’s still missing.” I glanced down, and swallowed my words. Jasper closed his eyes, and squeezed them tight. Eclipse was his sister. “I know, but I’ll be fine, I can take care of myself.” He said gently licking my muzzle. His touch was always cold, yet, curiously it still felt warm to me. "But You'll still be careful right?" I asked, obvious concern must have radiated from my eyes. Jasper nodded his head. I knew he wouldn't but somehow I still found comfort in it. His beautiful dark, practically onyx, eyes gazed into mine, sending shivers down my spine.
“Rabbit?” Ice said, breaking up our conversation. I looked at the Rabbit, my mouth was already salivating. "Yes Please!" I said digging in.
Suddenly Jasper wheeled his head around to where I had entered camp. "What is it?" I said quietly, shrinking to his side. "Evil." He muttered, not really thinking. "Shane," I exhaled, my mind ran over the name like licking rotten flesh. Jasper was always watching for my brother, always.
The whole pack quieted. There was something about my brother that instilled fear in all of us. It just made us freeze up. Jasper protectively placed himself in front of me. Ice looked at Jasper and me, nodded his head in a good bye, and ran off to the warrior’s den.
Shane smiled. He must have liked this sense of power. Being able to project fear was power to him.
My parents were blind. They liked Shane better. They thought he would be great for the pack. "Such ambition, skill, drive and power" they thought. I always ignored my parents remarks. I didn't think of them as parents. As far as I was concerned they were just the Alpha's of the pack. Trout, Ice, and Jasper were my family.
Shane's cool words snapped me out of my memories. "Hello." He said casually, almost a hiss. "Hello," I spat the words at him. I looked strait into his red eyes. I wasn't phased by what he was on the outside. Only on the inside. Somehow his aura of evil didn't effect me. I was unaffected by any of the wolves powers near me. I called it my 'Shield'. Even Jasper was puzzled, he wasn't able to read my thoughts, he said he couldn’t cheat with me, he had to work for everything. He often laughed about it.
Silver and Talon slipped out of their cave. "Hello Son." He said warmly to Shane. "Hello." Shane replied tonelessly, offering my parents a duck that he had half-mauled. Jasper often told me that Shane tried to be normal around my parents, to keep them thinking he was normal, to keep them in the shadows. But Jasper didn't like going into his mind. It was twisted and evil, I'm betting it hurt him, being able to see his thoughts.
Silver nodded her head. Jasper said they were considering him for Beta. Since Eclipse was missing, no doubt the doing of Shane.
"Will you be at the ceremony tonight." Silver whispered, quite loudly I might add, to Shane. "Of course, Mother." He said in a sweet voice. "I wouldn't miss it."
He must have know what they were planning, for a wide grin crept onto his face. A low growl erupted in my throat. 'Pompous Jerk' I thought as Jasper swiftly wisped me away to the Fighter's Den. "My Protector," I said sarcastically to him as he herded me. He smiled, and I rolled my eyes.
Chapter 2 --------------
"Why did you do that?" I complained to him later. "I didn't want him to hear you." He said blatantly. I looked away. "Isn’t there anything we can do to stop him?" I said, changing the subject quickly. Jasper nodded, "There probably is, but I'm not sure what." "Your a big help." I said playfully nudging his muzzle.
I'm perfectly normal. The voices tell me so... I don't suffer from insanity. I enjoy every minute of it... I hear voices in my head, and they don't like you...{=}{/=}{=}{/=}{=}{/=}{=}{/=}{=}{/=}{=}{/=}
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Re: Bane's Past « Reply #8 on Apr 20, 2008, 2:04pm »
XD ZOMG Funny story behind Jasper actually. I used to have a collection of wolf toys/beanie babies *I still do on my shelf actually* And one was named Jasper. When i was younger Our teachers (4th or 5th grade) had us write stories about a stuffed animal, a toy, or a pet. I wrote about my collection, and in the story they were all alive. -I had such an imagination- anyway Jasper was one of my charries. I kinda forgot about his story T.T Then last year or the year before -can't remember- I started reading twilight. And I saw the name Jasper. It clicked in but I couldn't remember why it was so familiar. Then one day it just popped in my head. Before in my 'little kid' stories Jasper was kind of a side character and he was the cuddly one. But when I read twilight I decided to 'dust off' Jasper and bring him back. He is totally different now, more like Jasper from the book, instead of the 'cute and cuddly' characters who liked to cheer the other animals up.
I wonder if I could find my old stories, maybe my mom kept them.... ehh Wishful thinking.
I'm perfectly normal. The voices tell me so... I don't suffer from insanity. I enjoy every minute of it... I hear voices in my head, and they don't like you...{=}{/=}{=}{/=}{=}{/=}{=}{/=}{=}{/=}{=}{/=}
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Re: Bane's Past « Reply #13 on Aug 9, 2008, 3:07pm »
Yay! And you know what I think? I think Jasper and Rose are exactly like Edward and Bella... except with different names. I mean, Rose reminds me irrestibley(cannot for the life of me figure how to spell that) of her.
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